Feed back from crit.
- good imagery
- strong concept
- looks a bit too much like an exhibition poster
- be more brave with imagery
- imagery may be a little abstract, reader may not understand the concept or may start to see other objects
within the photograph.
Need to do:
- experiment more with layout
- get rid of text
- make photograph more obvious that its from inside puddle
-get rid of flag
- Simplify right down.
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