From our final crit there where a lot of things flagged up needed attention. the main things being:
- we need to make it clear that the sweet isn't just a freebie we have done research and found that sucking on a sweet aids your concentration.
- we need to set out some guide lines for the readers so they can interact with the blog and book and hole
concept
- we need feedback from our audience
To do:
find a way to work on all of the above, e.g. re work designs
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